Comments : Eternal Paradise with Emily

  • 19 years ago

    by alfie

    really loved this poem too! i love the way you write them, they are so different. xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by alfie

    oh you commented on my poem, saying it should be better "if i am hell, you are heaven". you're rihgt it makes so much more sense, but i just wrote it quickly. I'll take more care next time, but i appreciate the comment. thanks for takin the time to read it, xxx