Comments : Another lie

  • 19 years ago

    by Krillin

    Nice work nikki. Keep up yhe good work. Thanks for the comments, nice to hear from a fellow aussie

  • 19 years ago

    by Chloe

    I really liked this poem. The rhyme was very nice, and so was the meaning of this poem :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Wow this poem was so great. Such emotion and feeling behind it. I really liked it! =)

    Thank you for the comment on my poem "untitled" I did not think of "as one" for the title of it and I currently have no other title in my mind (or think I ever will, lol) so I am going to use it. I think it's a good one. Thank you for the suggestion!

    Keep writing!

    ~Grace

  • 19 years ago

    by jess

    JARRAD HAS A GIRL FRIEND lol love u babe
    BEST FRIENDS FOR LIFE MWAH!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by jess

    JARRAD HAS A GIRL FRIEND lol love u babe
    BEST FRIENDS FOR LIFE MWAH!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by jess

    JARRAD HAS A GIRL FRIEND lol love u babe
    BEST FRIENDS FOR LIFE MWAH!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    wow! nice poem!! very well written!! keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    :( WOW a poem, that I relate to..it's sad..lies hurt! I hate lies. Keep writing. I enjoy reading ur poems. *Tori*