Nice work nikki. Keep up yhe good work. Thanks for the comments, nice to hear from a fellow aussie

I really liked this poem. The rhyme was very nice, and so was the meaning of this poem :)

Wow this poem was so great. Such emotion and feeling behind it. I really liked it! =)

Thank you for the comment on my poem "untitled" I did not think of "as one" for the title of it and I currently have no other title in my mind (or think I ever will, lol) so I am going to use it. I think it's a good one. Thank you for the suggestion!

Keep writing!

~Grace

JARRAD HAS A GIRL FRIEND lol love u babe
BEST FRIENDS FOR LIFE MWAH!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

JARRAD HAS A GIRL FRIEND lol love u babe
BEST FRIENDS FOR LIFE MWAH!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

JARRAD HAS A GIRL FRIEND lol love u babe
BEST FRIENDS FOR LIFE MWAH!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

wow! nice poem!! very well written!! keep it up!

:( WOW a poem, that I relate to..it's sad..lies hurt! I hate lies. Keep writing. I enjoy reading ur poems. *Tori*