Comments : Thinking of you

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Oh wow hun this poem was so deep and full of hurt and regret! I felt and can remember what that pain feels like - the pain of a lost love - it does forever burn (out of one of my poems and so true) Dont worry tho im sure one day you will find the true love you deserve....my fave lines in this piece were: you are the prince of my soul
    and don't know it
    you criticize your self
    not knowing
    that you have captivated me
    in every possible way
    I think they are just the essence of beauty such strength of feeling in them! Well done on a great poem!
    Eirisa oxoxo