Fnatastic Job!

sh!t...thats amazing...and sad...you're an amazin writer...keep it up...<333
-Mortalidaga
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Whoa, that was a great poem. There was a line in there that said your walls will never be brought down, I hope that is not true. You are a fantastic writer, and I hope to see more of your work on here soon. Great job.

Wonderful Job. That was such a sad, but very well written, poem. I hope to be reading more of your work in the future. I too, feel that way sometimes. So sorry for everything, yet, never actually doing anything, or wanting anything, but other's affection and caring. Pull through. §

Your Poem is so true there are others who feel like this and cant help the fact of wanting to die..theres really nothing worth living for, except others
and if you told people how you feel, or how you think theyd just watch you 24/7, and my thinking is always not to clear ive made stupid mistakes espically with guys.

This is so true it reminds me of well me My parents dont like me writing about suicide and crap like that But i still do so yeah kool poem

i can totally relate. i just wanna tell everyone that im all better so they wont be so sick of my depression but then i realize i din choose to have it, it just happened and they'll have to deal with it just like i do. ur poem was beautiful. it really hit straight to my heart. great job.
Morgan

ur poem gave me goosebumps its wonderful and i can relate to its subject matter, u have an excellent style keep it up i look forward to reading more xxKimmixx

THIS WAS A GREAT POEM!
I LOVED IT. IT WAS WELL WRITTEN. I HOPE TO READ MORE IN THE FUTURE!

i loved this poem...your doing a great job and your only thirteen...man i never thought about the things your thinking about until now...but just keep it up and stay alive at least to write...--joann

awwww great poem!