your poem really describes what im goin thru rite now it helps alot and your a really great writter.
hope to see more of your poems,
erica

Hey i liked your poem i think invisible or hidden would be an appropriate title. Just some suggestions well check out my poems sometime.

Great Poem! A suggestion for a title from me would be Living In Secrecy. I look forward to more poems. You're very talented. Check out some of mine and please comment.
-Conner

very good poem, you know how to express your feelings.

Hey there~Great Poem! I am going through the EXACT same thing you are, or at least as what the poem says. There is an important guy in my life who is with someone else but everytime I see him, i love him more! Keep up the great work!

wow that was really really good i liked it soo much 5/5

whoa that is such a kool poem, its simple but it still desrcibes wat many of us go through. keep it up gurl

xxoo,
alysse

OMG!!...Its so great to know that i'm not the only one going through that situation right now...that poem was great...it really hits to the heart...Its awesome...keep it up!!

Good Poem! Keep writing, I will read your stuff!!!!

-Kiersten

omh thats how i totally feel right now,i like this boy but he has another g/f. you should right alot more poems :)

ohhhh... I can really relate to this poem... *sigh* how I wish I don't.... but hey, it a great poem, it speaks my thoughts :) good job :D:D

i can totally relate. awesome poem. keep it up!

Hey Destiny,
thanx for commenting on my poem Racist love, I really appreciate it! You are a great writer keep up the good work and you are right We all do Bleed Red!! lol thanx you're great! keep up the good work

I love your poem! I couldn't have found a better way to tell my current boyfriend how I felt about him! you helped me alot!

This is really good ! keep it up!

I love it, im going through that right now

I can't relate to any of this, as for all I know you could of been the person that knew to let him go. If he cared enough, he would of broken his ties, without all of the lies.

Sorry if that sounds cruel. But believe me its no fun being on the other end...when you realize you lost your best friend.

If i was a cheater, or homewreaker I'd give you 5/5..oh what the hell its been 4 yrs, you got my vote