Awesome Deep poem...i love it!

deeply moved-but signs of hope there

vERY GOOD it flows out naturally and it really carried me away.You know the thing a poet must have is to be able to take the person reading her?his poems and thake him "there".I mean that the reader must be able to get the feeling and the atmosphere of the poem.I mean....I am forgeting my English!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)