Thats really beautiful, i love your use of raw emotion coz its a really hard topic to write about but you seem to have summed it up in a few mere verses. youve got incredible talent, keep it up. xx

Not only is this a good poem, but it leaves an important "life" lesson that does'nt just apply to some, but everyone. Nice write james!

Thanx for your comment btw ;)

omg..I almost started crying cuz i have lost so many ppl close to me in my life. This was such a heartbreaking and touching poem. Im sorry if you have suffered loss like this. Keep up the great work. xoxo

WoW. This is a great poem and its message is timeless. people could read this in 20yrs time and it would still have the same effect and just as much meaning. Great Work. xmollyxx

Very powerful and wonderfully written poem. The flow was almost perfect, really enjoyed it.
-A