I loved the line
To give into the darkness that lies deep within.
But I also really love how you ended this poem. I thought it was nicely written. Good Job!

Damn you are good.....love the darkness in your poems ...sent shivers down otherppl spines like...wish mine was as good.
could u read n comment on my poem i wud really appreciate ur comments and opinions

Damn you are good.....love the darkness in your poems ...sent shivers down otherppl spines like...wish mine was as good.
could u read n comment on my poem hate i wud really appreciate ur comments and opinions

OMG love it :p