I could truly relate to the emotion of having to say goodbye to someone you once loved, and you captured it perfectly. Well done, I enjoyed reading your poerty. *5/5*

Really good poem. I really liked this poem.

5/5

Keep up the good work!!!

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You should correct copy/ paste mistakes.
This piece is filled with greatly described emotions and it is very touching. The ending adds great effect to the whole poem- the last two lines. I like the rhythm of this and amount of feelings that you managed to express through this poem.

The ifrstp oem you posted hey lols, really exellent i thought it would show some different in talent but it was just as good as the rest of oyur poems xxx alex xxx

"Shhh, don�t shed a tear for we knew this would come one day,
For I love you my dearest and goodbye for that is all I have to say."

^^I love that...so moving and bittersweet, as is the whole piece.

I thought this was beautifully written, the loss and pain is felt very clearly by the reader, while the flow and imagery combined make for a beautiful read.

Excellent... Very nice poem... You are a nice poet...

This is heartbreaking... i can really relate to it.. ... sometimes what we have is good but you know its not right..and you have to let it go...

the emotion and feeling was very powerful.. and the flow was good.. although i think you forced a few words to rhyme.. but other than that i loved it.

5/5