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I can't tell you enough how good you are. i have to read your poems at least 2 times every time because they are just so deep and make me think, very lovely job :D

Great job really liked the story that was told in this poem xxx alex xxx

This one was my fave from all the poems I read by you. The flow was consistent making it easy to read and also a joy. Your rhymes were not forced and it all just came naturally. Again your imagery was wonderful painting the scene in my mind. Well done *5/5*