Good poem.
The flow was flawless.

'It was the love that god gave,
so that all man will not be hell�s slave.'

Well done 5/5

[Sarah]

Very beautiful poem..It flowed perfectly and the lines where filled with power and good choice of words too.kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Beautiful. Just simply beautiful. 5/5
~Steff

Hm.
Very interesting.
You proposed a question and wrote it well.
I like that it seems you question faith, but not in a bad way.

Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

I love love love this poem.

Gods love is stronger than everything.

keep the Faith

much love, kelsi

Unlinke your previous two poems, i like this poems structure. i love the rhyming coupletys used and the flow was absoloutley brilliant. The first two lines you instantly tell us what your beliefs are. A good introduction to the poem. Then you go to question beliefs that people do. The messgae your saying is displayed quite strongly in thie read. Then you turn what the poem is syaing around. You say what you believe. It seems like your questioning it, then going to it. It reflects something that many people do. Question there religion and then when learning more they go back to it becuasethey believe its right. A good read. Message displayed strongly. Try using a more vaired punctuation. Keep it up though. xx

All in all this is good poem.
You should correct a few copy/ paste mistakes in it.
I don't like the topics closely related to religion but you did very good job here, asking some important question through the piece.

"suppose to feel,
and how can it be my thrill."

^^I was thrown of by those lines. No matter how you pronounce them, feel and thrill don't really rhyme.

I wasn't to keen on this one actually.
It just felt like something was missing...like you were holding back or something.

It's not terrible, but you've certainly done better.

Fantasitc, short but really got me capture the moment and anylise deep xxx alex xx