what a neat piece of writing, I love it, so simple yet so beautiful :) Good work girl. As for the advise on making the poem sound finished... here is my 3 cents input.

come to me
come to me
spirit of creativity (changed)

grant me the power
give me an answer

come to me (added)
come to me (added)
essence of poetry (added)

That might make the poem sound more finished, but you call the shot ;) the poem is great the way it is :)