awesome poem Mark... I love all of em... :-D

and i'm so happy that you joined :-D

awesome poem, really gave me the spooks, and really creative, keep up the awesome work :):)
-Mortalidaga
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Yikes!!! This is great!

Megan

Dude, this is a really cool poem. You worded it perefctly..super smooth read and you kept the story moving forward. This is something I wish I had thought up.

5 big thumbs up..no doubt!

Wow really amazing work! I loved it. You rock!

VERY GOOD POEM, YOU HAVE SUCH A GREAT TALENT AND IT WILL TAKE YOU FAR

i love this poem so much. Please read mine if you have time.

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!! i love poems that go with a previous song or something like that... i loved it, i really did, good work!!

yo that S*** was hot. keep up your work.

crazy shit cool written

Woah! This was awesome!!!!!! I think you just inspired me to try and write a dark poem of my own....muhahahah.....good job!!! ~dandy~

That was damn good

Im reading into all of your poems, trying all the different genres, and this is an excellent poem. awesome. It should be a classic. another 5 from me. good job.

u scared me dude....now im going to check under my bed whenever i sleep....keep writing..
luv anagha

If I have your permission, I'd like to print and take this one up to the camp. The next big bonfire, with all the kids (young and old) I'd love to share it with them. I do believe most will be running into the camp for the night and not want to sleep in their tents. :)

That is so kick ass man loved it loved it so muched it kicked ass

Haha this is well written and humorous! Good job!

That was pretty damn fantastic.
Just the one stanza put my flow off a little..
Otherwise a terrific piece, and I don't even need to tell you because you know that!

Excellent poem very sad but like a scary story for a child, great work.