***But I fight to be strong,
Even when weakness takes control***

that i forgot to do when i was weak... i liked it... =) loving ur poem... hit my spot... deserves a5... hope u pass by mine sometimes =) take care... ciao

Excellent ... :) my fav part was this:

But never does it listen,
Sadness thrives inside my veins,
I'm forever surrounded in this darkness,
Forever in it's chains

Sadness is truely a chain, once it gets ahold of us, we'll be captives forever ... i love your poems ... i think i've said that before ... we have lots of feelings in common as i think ... keep writing hon never stop :)

hey that was flockin brilliant.. normally a poem that long wud have lost its flow or something by the end but that was really good rite up 2 the very last line. gd wrk

hey look i just want to say that you have a great talent that you shouldnt wait and i love all of your poems u are really a remarkable person

hey look i just want to say that you have a great talent that you shouldnt wait and i love all of your poems u are really a remarkable person