okay

This is so similar to something i'd write.

Its so beautifully sad, and lovely.

Your definately not alone in how you feel, i have a poem called, 'memo', where i exhaust the ideas and ideals of my ex, and conclude that i wished we'd never met. Its really short, if you get a chance you should check it out.

Anyway your poem is great, i'm gonna go check out more of your work now.

Well done.