Your poem is so sad, it makes me want to cry. You're awesome at conveying emotions. Is this a true story, if so I'm so sorry about your Mom!

Thanx alot.... wasn't sure about submitting any poems at all, I'm not happy with them... so it is nice to read what you have written ;)
This isn't a true story to me and "please daddy dont" isn't either... but I do know someone who went through something like that....thats why I wrote them poems....

Very good poem... sad as well... sry to hear about ur friend, must have been pretty hard. thx for commenting on my poem... means alot to me

Thank you also for commenting ;)
It was quite a few years ago... but it was very hard for her....
No problem.... ;) will read more of your poems tomorrow ;)