Aww this is such a sad poem =( I'm sorry for you. But it was nicely written. Keep up the good work!

~Grace

Intresting style..and it contained so much emotion. I really liked it!

yes i loved the style..and im sorry fpr you as well :{ beauitfully written though..<3
-Mortalidaga
xxxTakeCareAlwaysxxx
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Good poem, different style, but brilliant
Take care
xxxxxxx

That was a good poem. It was different but I liked it. Are we gonna see some more poems from u?

Clever ... I loved it!! Keep it up.

this poem has its nice little coolness about it.. u know? its good

It can often take a lifetime for us to realise that love is usually in the most obvious place and almost always alot closer in proximity than we think...i can always relate to your poems an never stop enjoying reading your work Kevin keep it up an best of luck Much Luv and thanks for sharing Eirisa xoxo

Thanx you everybody..I reeeeeeeally appreciate all the comments..thank U so much:)

I was going to comment, but Chris Georgiou is a hard act to follow.

I will say this though.. I'm going to steal this poem structure/style one day. hehe
Loved it

I really loved this. its really unique. intresting and soo sad. an unexpected ending. i like the style of your poems, the flow and rythm is always so well thought out. xmollyxx

i love it!! very creative and original. keep up the good work.

learn of me, live through me, love only me: INNA

That is a sad poem i hope that in real life such a thing didn't really accure because true love will always find a way great poem