HAHA you tell him girl! That was quite funny! I hope this is not true..but i love it when us girls catch our men like that..thinkin they can go around playin us like they some kind of h*e! That man should feel stupid whoever it was..And Eirisa if it is true..This man does not deserve such a weonderful person as you to go and cheat on you like that..Please! This was great you sure told him! ANd you know i would sya somethin to his @$$ if i was there..he should no better then to mess with my girl! Well worth the five!

Holy crap that was intense!!! I hope to god that never happens to me. I'd definately be broken for life. Godo thing I know how to treat a girl and how to be respectful. No offense, but this poem kinda scared me lol. Good work Eirisa and take care.

Hey Chelsey - thanks for your words as always hun! You make me smile always and NO its not true initially as most of my poems do i started writing it with a completely different story and ending in mind but this is what i came up with ....Richard - Thanks your so talented i always value your feedback so highly :o) No offence taken lol i can be so evil an vindictive when provoked lol Craky Clown - Thanks for your time and feedback!

Very emotional! Poems like this inspire me and im sure inspire a lot of other girls. It sends the strong message not to let a guy push you around. Congrats, that was excellent!