it's victoria, not vanessa... nice name though.

:'( OMG I cried that is such a sad poem. I'm sorry this happened to you, and god bless Vincent. Beautiful poem, Beautifully written

i do like it, this poem is sad, its great...good job

That was awesome!! Gave it a 5!! Bravo!!

Sarah

beautiful but sad, sorry about this loss. I find it long but brief to talk bout life itself especially a loved one. Great poem there!!! keep it up.
Take care

AMAZING *CLAPS* even though, it was unbelievably sad..I enjoyed reading it. I love your use of writing. Keep up the wonderful work! :) -Tori*

:( sad like I expected... Im really sorry for your lost, but Im sure he is at a much much better place now. This poem was very touching and with a very good ending parts. I loved reading it... I wish you well :) take care now.

so sad....but beautiful poem..perfect work...keep writting girl...and thanks for the nice commenting...all i appreciate it!!..
take care.

You have turned a tragedy into a positive message, truly amazing. You and your family are in my thoughts and prayers. Just remember they are never really gone as long as you keep them alive in your heart! Take care~Holly

That was really good...My aunt had a few lost, its sad when it happens...this is really touching and i think i even cried...thanks!

that was really good but really sad .. keep up the good work