excellent

It is definetly hard to write a Pantoum. And you have done it pretty well. I felt that the flow of the poem was sacrificed a bit. But that had nothing to do with the pantoum style. Great go. You are greatly talented.

Ohh i love pantoums. This was was very sweet, usually pantoums are about single moments, or a caption of an emotion. I loved how you did this slightly differently and about the meaning of friendship. I thought you used the form very well, and for a first one i'm very impressed.
Only i always thought in the last stanza the second and fourth lines were turned around so it's opposite to the first. It would read as...
"Always there to stick up for you
That is what friends are all about
Remaining by your side tried and true
Always there to help you out"
Very well done i loved it!

nice poem keep itup

AWESOME! Great poem...and awesome format! It flows so well, and does not feel forced at all.