I don't think up and f-ck ryhme very much. Other than that, great write.
Aken Sol

Thanks Kracky. Sometimes poetry doesn't have to rhyme though, does it? Plus, it sounds close enough. I can think of a few of your poems where couplets don't rhyme ;-) Thanks dawg.

Lol. I'm just playin dawg. I think it's good. Sides, if u put f-ck and up together, they also make sense.
Aken Sol

Kracky, Kracky, Kracky.....lol. That's all I gotta say.