I think you did a good job;)

I hope the write did it's job of helping you bridge that gap with your dad.

Thanx 4 your comment btw!

oh wow this was amazing ... i hope its not true ... i've read lots of poems regarding this issue ... but i still cant imagine how a parent can neglect or abuse his or her child in any way ... ur a very good writer ... i liked the rhyming style, nice idea ... :)

i kno im becomming a fan,lol. but i liked this poem, its as lovely as your others. and i like it caz i know EXACTLY how u feel. this poem is almost the same relationship that i have with my own dad,

*princess