This is about a friend of mine who has self harm issues, or i should say other issues which provoke her to self harm. I'd appreciate a review..especially a breakdown of how you understood it.

I liked this poem. And it helped to know the meaning behind it before I read it. GOod job!

~Grace

"To be breathing for a reason to continue"...To me this explores the dividing line between the body and the spirit.

"To others looking, impressing the need upon to dazzel"..."Breadcrumbs to hidden pains"...As I read your words the pain of the emotional and physical abuse leaps out from everyword.

I found your words enigmatic, invoking much thought to myself...
Please take a look at some of my poems.

Kind regards

Hey Kevin

Check out my comment box on "Wanna know what I can do" I would be interested in your response.

Hayley

Very deep...

good poem, sad tho good luck on ur friend

hope ur friend will soon realize that she got u... =) anyways thanx for the comment on mine =) much appreciated =) and oh! liked ur poem =) well written... =) much love...