Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

Hello :o) thank you for visiting and i hope you liked my poem please feel free to leave critique either favourable or not ...i would appreciate honesty and some advice on writng too...thank you :o)

really good job!

Hi please leave your comments to this poem either good or bad i will take on board any advice that is offered ...thanks for reading i hope you enjoyed my poem