Wow I thought that was soooo good!! The way it just seemed to flow and rhyme just seemed so natural. I loved it!

Nice poem...5

a very good poem. thanks for the comment on mine. it meant a lot. keep up the good work, take care!

Hey omg this is soo good. i gave it a 5. oh yah and thanks for commenting on my poem.

thats an amazing poem i loved it i give it a 5 but it deserves much more!..thanks for commenting on my poem it meant alot!

This is the way it happens sometime, that's for sure. Well written, good work! lol

hey .. loved this poem .. gr8 work ..