wow. the rhyming was perfect and the poem really expresses emotions. excellent.

but when some1 commits suicide, they make a sin- they won't go to heaven. just somethin i wanna say in case this is how your feeling at the moment. take care:)

This is good. I hope its not a true story. Well thanks.

no it's not a true story. thanks for your comments.

hey..this is really well written..and i can totally relate =\..keep it up..
take care...
love tegan