Comments : A Burst of Emotions

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    do you really feel like that or do u just like writing about it. i mean, its none of my business or anything, but i don't like it when ppl feel they don't belong or something, thats not the way life should be.

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    wow, you have such a talent girl, I've wanting to write a non-rhyming poem for ages but it never worked for me, this piece is great, no rhymes but flows so well... I hope this is not what you really feel like tho :(....

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    haha thanx bizarre and allen, unfortunately yes it is the way I feel, most of it anyway. And its true people are forced to hide their emotions. I think because this is how it was easier for me to write a non rhyming poem, it just kinda came out anywayz. But thanx 4 ur comments they are very much appreciated!!

    xxoo,
    alysse