Comments : Gasping for Air{True Story.}

  • 19 years ago

    by Luz

    Good poem and i like how it twisted the motive for her death good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Chasityy

    thanks^.^

  • 19 years ago

    by Likke.a.demon!

    thats sweet how she did that for her friend, but bad!! I liked this a lot.

  • 19 years ago

    by Chasityy

    thanks for commenting

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    haunting, but great. keep up the great work

  • 19 years ago

    by Chasityy

    Thank ya!^.^