oh my goodness..that was like a movie... I mean Damn!! I could picture everything you and ya mate used to do!! Thats what I LOVE about your poems they always seems to make me picture it..like a mind movie..And thats so amazing..You know i feel for you Eirisa and i do pray for your man to come back in your life..But this by far was one of the best you wrote!! You had me smiling yet crying for you at the same time!! You've got some major talent and i hope you don't ever stop sharing it with us!! I hope your pain will go away and everything will work out good..I got nothin but love for you sis!! Nice Job!!!

Chelsey your words bring tears of happiness to my eyes an my life THANKYOU! and thanks to everyone for reading my work! xoxo

Very good and I hope things can work out the way you want it. God Bless, Take Care!

Thankyou Meena i know you understand i miss him so much more each day...and Ann your kind words and feedback are always welcome

Sad yet beautiful. You really have a lot of talent. Good luck with everything

Perfect .... I mean there are no words for this poem it`s so good keep on writing `cause I want to read more of your poems and U know what I`m putting U even in my favorites `cause all your poems are so great
PLEASE keep on writing

maaan, u da best! u simply rock! moved me to tears...

maaan, u da best! u simply rock! moved me to tears...

sorry i didn't use your name, do you still love me though lol