This is one of the most unique poems I have written, so please vote and comment on it. Thanks in Advance

OMGosh... I love these poems SoOoOoOo much... they are awesome... i've wondered the same things before in my life... very good explanation from gods point of few... and great questions from the child.. awesome poems... 5 5 5 all around... keep it up! good work!

Absolutely amazing...i love it...as well as "Dear Child"

Good job, David. Keep it up.

Ashley

Poetic Girl - Its part of the desperation of the person writing the letter to god - it just expresses his frustrations with his life and the fact that he believes it is God refusing to make everything better for him - anyways David that is my interpretation feel free to let me know if i am WAY off k?
Well I enjoyed this poem very much, i look forward to reading the second part and for one of your first poems this is quite an amazing effort really David you should be very proud...i'll keep an eye on the developement of your work because so far i am very impressed...thank you for sharing this piece with us
Eirisa xxoo

Wonderful job on this poem!! I know that feeling!I'm off to read "Dear Child". I can't wait!

Amy