wow Tears, this was amazing, surely going to be another number 1..keep it up..you're a fabulous writer..thanks for your comments..<33
-Mortalidaga
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Smile..<33

Chilling! Sad to see that a majority of your poetry is sad (not that its not wonderful too) but i would love to see some more positive work from you hun! I hope your feeling better within yourself - have faith Eirisa xox

oh my fricken word!! that was so amazing!!! geeze you are soooo good!!!!!! wow wow wow wow!!!!! I wish i could write like you!! YOUR AMAZING!!! every single one of your poems kick major ass!!!!!!!!!!! you've been on my favorites FOREVER for good reason!!!! everyone should read your poems cuz they are soo freakin good!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!

HEY GURL, GREAT POEM.
IM SORRY FOR THE WAY YOU FEEL RIGHT NOW, I KNOW WHAT ITS LIKE TO LIVE IN THE DARK WITH DEPRESSION. I YOU NEED ANYONE TO TALK TO EMAIL ME IF YOU WANNA
HAYLEY X

very nice poem ... i read in school but eventually didn't have to comment on it over there ... i liked it a lot ... it was a bit short, but contained lots of meaningful feelings ... the last part was very touching ... i made my friend read it and she got tears in her eyes ... ur good at touching people's hearts :)

Nice poem ToP, keep it up.

May my heart be with you §

NICE I LOVE THIS POEM IT FITS ME SO WELL AND KEEP IT UP AND GOOD LUCK
LiLlOvEbUg14

this is a great poem!! i havntgotten to comment on a lot of the poems ive read but ive read a lot of yours and they are all very touching and full of feeling!! never stp writing u have a true tallent!! and sadly i can also relate to a lot that you write about so if u ever need anyone to talk to and u have aim jus im me my sn is happybunny251 which ha to be change ill fix it soon and if i do ill tell ya!! thanx again ur poems have helped me a lot believe it or not!! thanx again and never give up theres always at least one good thing at the end of every journey in life and some are jus harder to find then others!!

chin up!! lylas!! ~~sam~~