Comments : Battle Within

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    wow. that's exactly how i feel... *blinks* umm, that was awesome. i liked it a lot. you really amaze me sometimes. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    Thats a really powerful poem, u use alot of poetic words i like it. Yo have alit of talent and Its cool how your able 2 write such a gud poem in such lil words. keep it up 'n' thanx 4 commenting on my powmz. Mwah!

    xxoo,
    alysse

  • 19 years ago

    by Lone-doodler (C)

    Really good........faces the problems of people head on.........(can prob relate......a lot!) U seem to have captured a lot of peoples feelings on a page.....^_^ Peace! Keep on writing!

  • Wow this is so meaningful.. If you stole it from humble monkey's lips then humble monkey stole it by peeping into my mind. ITs the daily fight which goes on in my mind.. may be a bit different. It was a very sensible poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Very Cool .................. !
    gave it a 5
    =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Great poem- it definetely portrays someone (maybe you, if this is factual) going through a lot of trouble with deciding on love or the right thing to do. I loved it, well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by giggles

    this was a really good one too im not sure of the meaning though i didnt get it as well as the others

  • 19 years ago

    by Sami

    You have an amazing talent that manages to draw people in. people can relate to your work, as can I.
    Keep it up...

    Love Sami xox

  • 19 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    wow great poem!
    ~5

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Beautiful just like them all