Comments : General Triel

  • I read Dark Hunter by GoldenKnight and I thought to myself, "Hey self, I think it might be a good idea to introduce the characters to everyone. In the epic (which I am still writing) the characters' personalities are revealed more through their actions and decisions.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    what a start to a story, very nice

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Hey

    I really enjoyed this piece. Pushes against the unknown boundaries with visionary passion. Inexorable paced.

    Please check out my work...Comment I'd be interested to read what you think.

    I have read your other work and really like your ellipitical style of writing.

    Kind regards
    Hayley

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Hey

    I have answered your question, in my comment box of "Dark Angel"

    Thanks for all your comments!