Comments : Hidden Complexion, Failing Perfection

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    I'm sorry that you know the feeling, from experience I know it hurts, and having others feel it, really makes me sad. Thank you for commenting.

    Much love §

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Hehe thanks Vlad. Yes, once again, I'm only 12. I'm sorry if my writing is confusing, but in all truth? I like it to be that way. I like people to have to think about what I write, instead of just reading through it and forgetting about it moments later. Even if they only think about it for five seconds longer, at least there was some thought. What I meant by that specific verse, was that I understand me more than anyone else, but even I don't get me. I'll continue writing, working on it, anything to makeit better. Thanks so much.

    Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Okay haha, sorry, I've been a little cloudy today. I didn't get much sleep. I guess I'll be able to say that soon enough...been there done that. Thank you Vlad.

    Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    I don't believe I'll ever start cutting, but if I do, it's no ones fault. At least, not in the long run. I just got finished reading that poem before I checked on this. It really jerked at my eyes, it was a really great poem Rose.

    Thank you §

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashmore

    Wow..What a strong, emotional piece Megan. I do declare you are a very talented young woman :) For 12, writing such pieces, you indeed will go far hun. Thank you for the comment on my poem. Take care of yourself

    Love, Jessica xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Thank you Jessica! That means so much! I never really thought about doing anything with my poetry, just wanting to write my feelings out. Thanks again, chin up!

    Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Aww thank you Martine! I wasn't really sure if this one was that great, because I didn't really take much time on it. Thank you for the comment. ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Wow I really love this poem. It was written so well! You're a fantastic writer for only bring 12 years old! Not saying poetry has an age... but ya know what I mean... anyway thank you for the comments on my poems~ It truly means a lot to me~ take care and keep writing!

    ~Grace

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Thank you dearly Grace. I didn't expect to get so much feedback from this one poem! Yes, I know what you mean...I looked at some other poetry by other 12 year olds on this site and mostly it's just...erm...yeah, you know what I mean. Not that I'm saying mine is good or anything...everyone has their own taste. Anyhow, I really enjoy your poetry, you keep on writing as well.

    Megan § ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Oh gosh Jen, I hope you're alright. My heart is with you, stay strong, I know you are trying. I'm here for you.

    Your lil sis, Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow, yet again another wonderful poem. It made me think alot. I really enjoyed reading it because I can relate to cutting and such and I know how all that feels. I hope u keep writing , you're wonderful