Wow, I really enjoyed this one. Good work.

hi me again this was a really good poem its easy to see. i also saw that ur from argentina! that is so kool my friend from school lived in buenos aires like 3 years ago. what part are u from? i really like ur poems very expressive. like my friend says "vos hizo muy bien" jajaja but anyways e-mail me at LaKiKi@hotmail.com sometime. or post a comment on one of my poems. keep doing a great job!!

thats so true!!
keep it up