Comments : If i could... ©

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    pls vote ppl!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bredada

    oh grl ive felt like dz i knoe i can really realte to this poem GOOD JOB;)

  • 19 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    good poem- i'm sorry about your dad, you loved him didn't you?

    abbi

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Short but great. No one will ever lose interest in such a poem. I like the composition, or whatever its called (Yeah, my English suck).

    Keep writing...