wow that was so well layed out and your rhymes were perfect, so beautiful. great job. i really like your poems. excellent work.

I can relate to that poem in so many ways, another great job, i liked ur ryming. keep writting, im running out of your poems to read.
Ben

excellent work.

Really heartfelt poem girl - this saddened me because i know how it feels - have a read of my broken friendship poems to know what i mean. you conveyed your feelings so well here and i commend you on a wonderful poem! Luv Eirisa xxoo

that was awsome i totally feel it, and i can relate.. this was wonderfly written.. i give u a 5

Oh my god! I can totally relate to that just now! I am going through the exact same thing.