Wow...i love it when ppl are angry n dark......

Wow powerful. I'm not used to reading poems with heavy cursing but this one had me gripped. All i can say is you must have a very vivid imagination to have written this. It was brilliant the way you described the murders and the anger and emtions you managed to build into it. But in a way it is very, very sick indeed. I'm sure those with a sensitive nature wouldn't want to read this. And all of that anger from matters of the heart, it's suprising what rejection can do to a person psychologically. Brilliant emotive poem. And very scary.