wicked work i love all ya poems.
keep up da primo work

Another of your amzing pieces. I love this one. It reminds me of one of my own, but this.. this is so much more powerful. Great work Tiffy, (Hehe couldn't resist)

~Kelly

woah, the wording in this poem seemed to make you think one thing, then if you read the poem over again it makes you believe another thing, the more you read it the more you seem to change your stand on what it is...but there is one thing i don't think i changed throughout all the poem...that it was masterfully writen and well versed.

Thank you for the read

very nice. ive been thinking of doing a schitzo poem for a while, now i think i will. ;-) good poem

Wow...really good job on this one...it showed a lot of feelings I liked it a lot. As always, keep up the good work.