Comments : The Dream

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Wow. This is a very good poem. Keep it up and take care of yourself! =)

    ~Grace

  • 19 years ago

    by Jeff Hollers

    The higher you go the farther you fall
    The longer the walk the farther you crawl.
    When it all crashes down.
    You break your crown
    Point your finger but there's know one around.

  • 19 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    Wow. That is very graphic. I totally like it. And shhh....but I feel the same way. ;-)