Hi Sedusha

This was a nice poem i think you should show it to him and let him know how you feel. If he doesn't appreciate this poem then hes not worth another moment of your time girl! Anyways my only piece of advice is too not use so many exclamation marks and unnecessary grammer like that, it just makes it a lil hard on the old eyes to read and defeats the purpose and emphasis on which these lil symbols are supposed to play...besides that this poem was great and a true pleasure to read Eirisa xoxox

Aw, I liek dis one ^.^ and thanks for your comment, ^.^ it made me smile, grrl, I really lieked this one so I'm given yew a 5! Hope to see more of your work soon, xoxo

~*SaMmIe*~