well worth the wait! thanks Victoria.

I really liked this one too, you followed part 2 on well. I like how you've gradually got across the message that the voices and the haunted soul is actually in your ( you in the poem) mind. Well that's the message i got anyway. I don't really know how it feels to be so messed up, and have voices tell you to end your life. But this certianly gave me a little taste. Very well done!

oh my gosh! definitely a NICE continuation of Part 1!! i'm loving it! it's so descriptive, and leaves the reader with a feeling of perpectual goosebumps!! haha . 5/5 stars...

Its very deep i love it

another step on a dark path, oh your soul can't be that dark already, oh i like your words

wow... I can't believe I missed this one, I didn't even know the second part was out... :( but hey :) its great work, spooky like the first, have to read the 3rd part now :) Keep it up girl.

Nice twist, now on to part III ^_^

--Bryce~

that was one amazing poem. gr8 goin.

WOW! i'm really loving these I can't wait to go on the third one. You really have some great talent!

You have a rare talent