:~O!! I'm in tears girl!! that is so sad..It should not be you with a broken smile...You out of people should be proud of yourself and have a smile that is so pure and whole!! I know you've had ruff times..But to push throught them all...girl you better turn that smile the right side up!!
Anyways this poem was amazing!! You do an awsome job and i thought it was great..like i said you should be very proud!!
That is a realy beautiful peom. And although i don not know you i noe admire you very much, i think it is amazing that you are so young but still turned life around and did what was right. luv, heather
First of all i think i can answer that previous question... you get your inspiration from life and though it has been such a trial for you, beauty has been shown in your writting.
This is a great poem im sorry ive been awol for a while just been beating back reality a bit but thanks for the freshener.
I like the dash of complexity in the poem i guess it reflects the source of the poem...
As with all your poems this one maintains your distinctive flow, great work.
I have to say i had guessed the ending a short way through the poem, Your strength feeds all those you meet and you are undoubtably an inspiration to all.
That was great!! I loved it!! Thanks for the nice comment that you gave me too!! You are in my favorites and I love all the poems of yours that I have had a chance to read!! U are a great writer!! Keep up the good work!!