Comments : The Girl With A Broken Smile

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    :~O!! I'm in tears girl!! that is so sad..It should not be you with a broken smile...You out of people should be proud of yourself and have a smile that is so pure and whole!! I know you've had ruff times..But to push throught them all...girl you better turn that smile the right side up!!
    Anyways this poem was amazing!! You do an awsome job and i thought it was great..like i said you should be very proud!!

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    that was so beautiful, and you used my fave line from any song ever as your name. perfectly done, and absolutely brilliant. wow, i am utterly and completely in awe.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary

    omg, that was really good. wow, yeah.

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather Clark

    That is a realy beautiful peom. And although i don not know you i noe admire you very much, i think it is amazing that you are so young but still turned life around and did what was right. luv, heather

  • 16 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Thankyou Heather that is so kind of you hun! xxoo

  • 16 years ago

    by Keanna Hopkins

    That is such well written poem...i love it! Great work...keep it up and u'll go a long way!!
    Love always
    Keanna

  • 16 years ago

    by FireCracker

    gr8 poem gurl . . loved it lotz . keep up the good work .. k .. ! ? ! LOL email me back soon !

  • 16 years ago

    by Semaran

    First of all i think i can answer that previous question... you get your inspiration from life and though it has been such a trial for you, beauty has been shown in your writting.
    This is a great poem im sorry ive been awol for a while just been beating back reality a bit but thanks for the freshener.
    I like the dash of complexity in the poem i guess it reflects the source of the poem...
    As with all your poems this one maintains your distinctive flow, great work.
    I have to say i had guessed the ending a short way through the poem, Your strength feeds all those you meet and you are undoubtably an inspiration to all.

  • 16 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Wow everyones comments here blew me away really thanks to everyone for being so amazingly supportive - the value of that support you will never truly know how much i appreciate!

    Luv Eirisa xoxox

  • 16 years ago

    by Gen

    That was great!! I loved it!! Thanks for the nice comment that you gave me too!! You are in my favorites and I love all the poems of yours that I have had a chance to read!! U are a great writer!! Keep up the good work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Janice Brown~©~

    OMG WOW!!! ilove this poem talk about tears in my eyes!
    keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Tyler

    Very good, it was long but that just makes it even better every line is good haha

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr M

    You really have a way of conveying your story so that it relates to so many others in the same position. You are quite a good writer.