:~O!! I'm in tears girl!! that is so sad..It should not be you with a broken smile...You out of people should be proud of yourself and have a smile that is so pure and whole!! I know you've had ruff times..But to push throught them all...girl you better turn that smile the right side up!!
Anyways this poem was amazing!! You do an awsome job and i thought it was great..like i said you should be very proud!!

that was so beautiful, and you used my fave line from any song ever as your name. perfectly done, and absolutely brilliant. wow, i am utterly and completely in awe.

omg, that was really good. wow, yeah.

That is a realy beautiful peom. And although i don not know you i noe admire you very much, i think it is amazing that you are so young but still turned life around and did what was right. luv, heather

Thankyou Heather that is so kind of you hun! xxoo

That is such well written poem...i love it! Great work...keep it up and u'll go a long way!!
Love always
Keanna

gr8 poem gurl . . loved it lotz . keep up the good work .. k .. ! ? ! LOL email me back soon !

First of all i think i can answer that previous question... you get your inspiration from life and though it has been such a trial for you, beauty has been shown in your writting.
This is a great poem im sorry ive been awol for a while just been beating back reality a bit but thanks for the freshener.
I like the dash of complexity in the poem i guess it reflects the source of the poem...
As with all your poems this one maintains your distinctive flow, great work.
I have to say i had guessed the ending a short way through the poem, Your strength feeds all those you meet and you are undoubtably an inspiration to all.

Wow everyones comments here blew me away really thanks to everyone for being so amazingly supportive - the value of that support you will never truly know how much i appreciate!

Luv Eirisa xoxox

That was great!! I loved it!! Thanks for the nice comment that you gave me too!! You are in my favorites and I love all the poems of yours that I have had a chance to read!! U are a great writer!! Keep up the good work!!

OMG WOW!!! ilove this poem talk about tears in my eyes!
keep it up

Very good, it was long but that just makes it even better every line is good haha

You really have a way of conveying your story so that it relates to so many others in the same position. You are quite a good writer.