Comments : I give up - You win

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..this was such a great piece..You always make such magnificent poems and it flows wonderful..I love the struture and the wording..so beautiful!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Absolutely amazing. God has blessed you with a beautiful talent. I enjoy each and every poem that you write. God Bless, lol

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Great poem girl, as always. Stay strong, fight that feeling of defeat.

    Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Biting. I love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Biting. I love it! I hope the individual(s) that "inspired" this critique somehow saw it.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    Katie, i absolutely love the poem! Hey, is everything goin okay? I haven't heard from you in a while and i'm worried i've offended you somehow. Will you please e-mail me!
    Love
    Sam

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    hey ! I saw you commented on Eirisa's poem " Accept MY Call" and I check up on that poem to see who all comments on it because she wrote it for me and my guy situation , hehe, and I saw you rname and just had to click on it to look at your poetry; and OMG its AMAZING yeah most are sad but so emotional and heartfelt and wonderful .. you are an amzing poet keep it up and you will go far ! ... Check out some of mine sometime if you get a chance , id love the feedback ... Gave it a 5 !

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    hey ! I saw you commented on Eirisa's poem " Accept MY Call" and I check up on that poem to see who all comments on it because she wrote it for me and my guy situation , hehe, and I saw you rname and just had to click on it to look at your poetry; and OMG its AMAZING yeah most are sad but so emotional and heartfelt and wonderful .. you are an amzing poet keep it up and you will go far ! ... Check out some of mine sometime if you get a chance , id love the feedback ... Gave it a 5 !

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholas

    Hey, I'm kind if a newbie to this poetry thing, so could you, maybe, read some of mine. And just tell me what you think?