another v good poem , my fav bit
Evaporating like an unseen tear.
Memories vanish, was I ever here?

That was amazing and dark

"Darkness surrounds me, turning red.
A forgotten soul hangs by a thread.
Take the scissors, cut the strings.
Unable to fall with demon wings."
...love it!!

That was very well done I loved it it flowed great and the imagary was exellent check out ominous fate wil you I would love to hear what you have to say. Good job!!!

reely cool i like it

gr8 poem, i really loved it, WOW ! ! AWESOME JOB .. and keep it up, check out my poems sometime if u get a chance .. !
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Wow that was an amazing poem I really like it!!

wow well dun very good
mazzy
xoxoxoxox

This poem was so awesome...I fell in love with it!! Keep up the great work...Chows 4 now...Jennie

wow, another gr8 one. i loved the second line, the symbolism you use is perfect for what your trying to describe.
" Evaporating like an unseen tear.
Memories vanish, was I ever here?"
i love the symbolism "unseen tear" it means so much when you compare it to real life, good job