very good i like it ***** stars

thx for your comment
it was very difficult for me to write it because i tried to make three in one
- you can read it whole and you can read it every even or every uneven line, did you see that?

Interesting way of writing.. I loved it! =) Keep it up!

~Grace

You are very talented. I really like your poems. They are beautifully written and the flow nicely. Wonderful job.