plz rate this poem to know how much i need to improve.

Good poem, but to much of a use of the word sky.
~*~Christina~*~

hey, nice poem!

Wow... that was a really good comparison... ur a talented writer.. as always... good work

Love,
Ipsita

Oh that was so sweet dear. i love reading ur poems.
and thanx a lot 4 commenting on my poems.
take care
bharti

It's beautiful.. just like what you're trying so hard to describe.
Wow, for a first poem, this is amazing..
Kudos m'dear
5/5
*Gem*