Comments : Shrapnel

  • 19 years ago

    by Lillian

    Hands down.. this one is all about the imagery.. brilliant.. so sharp and real. I can feel these words. The picture created is intense and very much real to me. Thats what Im not getting about the ratings... this is good stuff. A 5 definitely. "The steel inside me/ Calling out your name" dang that's good..lol