Good, good, good. Getting better with each one. You have a talent.
~*~Christina~*~

I truly enjoyed that poem- very great rhythim throughout it, well done!

hey mufu I really liked it. It was good! I'm gonna read more of yours keep it up!! RIP!!

Great job! I really like this poem. Keep it up.

Ashley

That was very good. i love how you make me see a picture in my head when i read what you write. loving it.
love ash

Bravo! You have amazed me so far with five of your poems that I have read. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work. You are a excellent poet. 5/5

Letty