Wow..mind-blowing. I loved the story. Got me sucked right into it, can't wait for part 2!! Will be keeping an eye out for it, heck I'll be keeping them both out lol. Awesome.

Wonderful job!! I loved it!!

Amy

Awesome poem! kick ass <33 loved it
-Mort
xxTakeCarexx

WOW, i've never seen a poem writen so well, keep it up.

Steve

Wow, that was amazing, you are an incredibly writer. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely, Amanda

Wow... Such a tragic story. Amazingly written. I loved it...

Wow...this was very intense! Awesome job as per usual! I loved this piece and can't wait till the next part!! Great job!

This poem was awesome...It sounded so real! Keep up the great work! chows 4 now...jennie

You are Awesome!! That was great and i love it so much..good job hun!
Tina

You are such an excellent poet. I LOVED this poem. I wish I could write like that.